Well done there is some great work here! Much improved from previous work so progress is happening!
Areas of your work that stood out regarding your trailer: -Your scenes or distortion, these worked very well with the genre and whole idea of your film -Sound effects, which were simplistic yet effective -The handheld camera effect, which is typical of teen thriller/horrors i.e. blair witch etc
Areas for improvement in regards to your trailer: -There could have been more variation of scenes (too many mist scenes) -As discussed if the handheld 'shakeyness' was not a theme in your film idea, consider using a tripod etc
Poster Comments: I liked the fact your 1st poster mirrored your visuals for your trailer, I believe your chosen image was strong in the sense it was simplistic but effective.Your second poster again was strong in catering for social media, very typical of the style/genre of online posters for your chosen genre, as appose to your 1st poster which you advised would be used mainstream I.e billboards, bus stops etc.
Areas of improvement for posters: 1st poster, reconsider the text and font size as it needs to be clear and engaging (name and clarity is important for marketing purposes) Additionally, consider having a review in the corner of mainstream poster, it makes it look more professional and engaging for your target audience.
Well done there is some great work here! Much improved from previous work so progress is happening!
ReplyDeleteAreas of your work that stood out regarding your trailer:
-Your scenes or distortion, these worked very well with the genre and whole idea of your film
-Sound effects, which were simplistic yet effective
-The handheld camera effect, which is typical of teen thriller/horrors i.e. blair witch etc
Areas for improvement in regards to your trailer:
-There could have been more variation of scenes (too many mist scenes)
-As discussed if the handheld 'shakeyness' was not a theme in your film idea, consider using a tripod etc
Poster Comments:
I liked the fact your 1st poster mirrored your visuals for your trailer, I believe your chosen image was strong in the sense it was simplistic but effective.Your second poster again was strong in catering for social media, very typical of the style/genre of online posters for your chosen genre, as appose to your 1st poster which you advised would be used mainstream I.e billboards, bus stops etc.
Areas of improvement for posters:
1st poster, reconsider the text and font size as it needs to be clear and engaging (name and clarity is important for marketing purposes) Additionally, consider having a review in the corner of mainstream poster, it makes it look more professional and engaging for your target audience.
Keep up the great work,
Fay